Wow blown away again by your excellent writing! I loved it! your great! 5/5 for sure!
*kaila*

COMMENT # 4

aww.. this is soo sad.. a clearly a very heartfelt poem.. this piece is FILLED with emotion and breathes poetry.. the words here are just perfect..definitly my favorite so far.. and im soo sorry for your loss

I try not to let the grief, just overcome my day,
I'll blow a kiss to heaven and send it when I pray.
I'll ask God to free me now, from a world so blue,
To take me up to Paradise, so I can fly with you.

these lines made me cry, this poem was so lovely. thank you so much!!

much love and many kisses,
bex

How did i miss this!!! awesome.....
you write like someone I know!!

AWWWW

OMG THAT WAS SOO PRETTY THAT I STARTED TO CRY!!!MY GRANDMA PASSED AWAY WHEN I WAS A Lil' GIRL TO, SO I KNOW WHATS IT LIKE TO LOSE SOMEONE YOU LOVE!!!BUT I GOT TO TELL YOU THAT POEMS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

Beautifully sad, I mean this poem brings tears out, and I can relate I just lost my grandma 2 years ago and I miss her everyday. Another thing God is never to blame for suffering that belongs to only 1 god Satan the devil. I hope you feel better, and I know that you will never heal because I haven't........Xxxcellent Poem

I also have a poem I make for my grandma, It's call Bleeding Tears, you welcome to check it out.

Wow that was really pretty.

Wow. this is so amazing. One of the best I have read on the site. The rhythm was perfect and it was all from the heart. I love it.
Keep up the good work!
*Brittney

This is one hell of a poem, i like to no wer poets get their inspiration from and i think u reflected it phenominally. uterly wounderful work, u couldnt ask for a sweeter poem. =]

Wow i love this poe im sorry about your grandma im sure she would be proud of u if she reads this poem !!!

Nice work on the poem gal its so sad but sweet.....
!tash!

This is the best poem i have ever read it is Excellent

That was something else, that was so good. Doy uo ever look in the Thesauraus? Well i loved it! Keep up the good work!

Absolutely Beautiful!!! Wonderful job on this one.

I really loved this poem, there's just so much emotion its amazing. well done
Teen>Love>Tragedy

The background history to this piece is invaluable in trying to get the best out of this wonderful piece! Well done! Neil.

Such beauty, such compassion, such elegance, such simplicity, such emotion, such talent all rolled into one
fantastic poem
keep them going :)
peace, love and wonder,
Sarah -xo

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Nice