Very beautiful poem. Loved it!

Very unique and creative free verse.
I believe the last line should read "boarded" not "aboarded". Other than that typo, it was great. 5/5.

I love it! your a great writer! beautiful poem!
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I like this poem, but dont get me wong - i think it could stil do with a lot of work! this poem has a lot of potential! A LOT!

Narc xxx

That was very good, i liked the flow and the rhyming.
you are a very talented poet, keep writing
love Tara-Kay

This is a very orginal write. The imagination is great. Keep up the good work.

Wow Amazing! Your a amazing writer!

I really loved the imagery and emotion in that poem and how the moon comforted you
keep it up