To be with you

by emptysole   Jan 7, 2007


Just to be with you,
i walked a mile,
your gentle lips,
your soft sweet smile,

What more could i want,
i found what i desire,
because when I'm with you,
my heart is set on fire..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Munkito

    This really spoke to me. It's a lovely poem. I'm liking your work to.:)

  • 17 years ago

    by jolene

    Short but sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Aww this is short but sweet i really liked it!
    5/5
    luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short, sweet and beautiful. I like this a lot. I am puzzled as to why this got voted down and I wish when people did vote down, they would leave their critique in a comment........I give you a 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I like it. laura xxx btw you been on my fav list for ages lol

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