I really liked this, especially

I'll take this God forsaken life
With this silver hell sent knife

so haunting well done

A very powerful and beautiful write. But the beauty was haunting, and the poetry flowed along as though it was being whispered on the wind.

I especially loved these lines,

"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger,
So you just may live a little while longer."

A wonderful write. *5/5

This was really really powerful and seriously almost made me cry. I loved it, thank you so much it's really really good.

I love this poem. it reminds me of someone i know. it really makes you think about life... but i really love how u called the knife a silver hell sent knife.

I love the ending of this poem! nice work.