This was so very sad...but such a pleasure to read.
The emotion and depth in this piece are clear to see for anyone who reads it.
Excellent work on this.

Major sad poem shae. this is very clever how you wrote it tho. i loved the uniqueness about it!

5/5 david

Well done, it seems alittle forced in places and in others it just dosn't seem to flow all that well, but over all a great poem, 4/5
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