Aww! This is wonderfully sweet and peaceful. I have never read such an intense love poem with true words that touch the heart in such a long time! It was far from cliche, and very touching. Excellent write! 5/5

Hey this poem was beautiful it was a very well written piece great use of words. very heartfelt great job keep it up. xx

This was such a sweet poem,the emotions are feeling were very real in this one.very good word choice,made it about twice as beautiful.5/5
--lexie

Wow great work. Keep it up.

True Love is beautiful. You have expressed ot so well in this poem. A real true love does last forever even when one has to go, the love stays in your heart. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

I dont know who down voted but the were dumb, this poem is tres bien, i especially like the 2nd stanza because of the repition of the first word, great poem taylor, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Great job! i like how i could actually see what you were writing, like i was there or something. anyways, you're a great writer, and i totally luv this poem!

*Shawte*

This is sweet and beautiful. I also like this stanza:

"Our love is real and a first-time innocence.
But something that can't vanish into air.
We have something that stays forever.
Something that will always be there"

This poem is so nicely written. I know the feelings of being in love, especially the first time you fall in love. You feel untouchable and you feel that your love will last forever. But love like everything can die, so always be careful and never take it for granted. Excellent job 5/5

Wonderful! I thought the poem is great! It was very well-written. I loved how you wrote it, the flow was excellent and I especially love the last stanza! Very touching! Well done!
5/5