This poem has a great poem.. with a message..
Keep writing your going to imporove over time..:]
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab :]

Good poem,
luv it,
keep writin,
___XOX

THis poem has great rhyme and again...i can relate...great job! i enjoy reading your poems...they can be sad but i like them...i showed this poem to a friend of mine and it is her situation so..she cried but she told me to tell the author that she is great!

Good job
5/5
~christina