Comments : Lost destiny

  • 17 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    Tnx!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Awww! such a beautiful poem, escellent work.. keep writing!
    ___XOX

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Amazing poem!
    you are brilliant at use of words and decribing!
    5/5 :)!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was beautiful. quite sad but pure. a lovely story you told. i loved it. a nice flow and very expressive. i love poems in story forms, their the best one's to read in my opinion and i absoultely loved this one. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.