That's kinda really cool how it can be related to by anything. To me, it was like, i don't know. I was too busy thinking of what it could be, i guess. Maybe i'll go read again and see. great job.

-parker

This was cool i like the whole relate it to anything kinda thing great work

Gee this is good. i loved how you ended it. ended each para with the title. made the effect way more dramatic. i wanted to read it more.

5/5 bravo! clap clap.

David