Comments : God why?

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    Good job... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    This was really amazingly written and was really interesting to read. really really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    This is a terrific poem, it deserves so much more than a 5/5! you did a real good job on this! excellent!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    This is excellent!! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I really like this poem. its not really like anything you've ever written but i like it a lot!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This poem sent shivers down my back, i mean, its EXTREMLY good, love it, just capitalize your i's, loved the flow, and especially the last stanza, 5/5!!! please keep making them like this!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Doesnt matter

    Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wow this poem is really intense throughout, So many ppl know the exact pain of this poem and it upsets me. I ask God why? Great poem even god would agree a 5/5 excellent work

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! this is so sad =[...but geat poem! i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I absolutely adore this. It's brilliant. The flow was spot on. Wonderful job here. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wowwwwwwwwww. that's all that i can say. the rhythm was very constant throughout your poem, and that's what i loved most about it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Oh I liked this one! It was very unique, in a way.. perhaps because of the wording. Less words make the words you use much more impacting. And the rhyming! No wierd cliches or anything. Great great great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You are very talented, i can see that.
    this poem flowed brilliantly, the repition worked wonders.
    a very sad poem, keep writing.
    much love, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    About incessant love. I stuck with simple rhymes cos not only was it very hard trying to rhyme with a fixed syllable count but it was for a younger audience. I could say the same about this poem, lol. Simple rhymes.
    But you know as well as i do. It's the simple words that get the point across
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by *~*gator-baby*~*

    Thats real good i can kinda relate to it sept wit my brother sted of dad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Becca this was a very powerful poem. What a message it sends. I can feel the pain in this it really touched my heart. I hope this is read by many. Excellent job! ~Bravo~

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very different, never saw a poem like this before. Good Job. I liked it. Keep up the great work. You are very talented.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Kally

    Really GOOD!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by GothChick

    Great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    ITS HARD TO MAKE POEMS LIKE THAT SOUND GOOD, BUT U REALY DID, U DIDN'T USE ANY OLS RHYMING WORDS THEY ALL FITTED REALLY WELL