Good job... 5/5

This was really amazingly written and was really interesting to read. really really good!

This is a terrific poem, it deserves so much more than a 5/5! you did a real good job on this! excellent!

Narc xxx

This is excellent!! 5/5!

I really like this poem. its not really like anything you've ever written but i like it a lot!

This poem sent shivers down my back, i mean, its EXTREMLY good, love it, just capitalize your i's, loved the flow, and especially the last stanza, 5/5!!! please keep making them like this!!!!

Good job

Wow this poem is really intense throughout, So many ppl know the exact pain of this poem and it upsets me. I ask God why? Great poem even god would agree a 5/5 excellent work

Wow! this is so sad =[...but geat poem! i love it!

I absolutely adore this. It's brilliant. The flow was spot on. Wonderful job here. 5/5.

Wowwwwwwwwww. that's all that i can say. the rhythm was very constant throughout your poem, and that's what i loved most about it. 5/5

Oh I liked this one! It was very unique, in a way.. perhaps because of the wording. Less words make the words you use much more impacting. And the rhyming! No wierd cliches or anything. Great great great!

You are very talented, i can see that.
this poem flowed brilliantly, the repition worked wonders.
a very sad poem, keep writing.
much love, Tara-Kay

About incessant love. I stuck with simple rhymes cos not only was it very hard trying to rhyme with a fixed syllable count but it was for a younger audience. I could say the same about this poem, lol. Simple rhymes.
But you know as well as i do. It's the simple words that get the point across
*Gem*

Thats real good i can kinda relate to it sept wit my brother sted of dad!

Becca this was a very powerful poem. What a message it sends. I can feel the pain in this it really touched my heart. I hope this is read by many. Excellent job! ~Bravo~

Very different, never saw a poem like this before. Good Job. I liked it. Keep up the great work. You are very talented.

Peace, Joe

Really GOOD!!! 5/5

Great poem!

ITS HARD TO MAKE POEMS LIKE THAT SOUND GOOD, BUT U REALY DID, U DIDN'T USE ANY OLS RHYMING WORDS THEY ALL FITTED REALLY WELL