Comments : Our Fading Year

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You really express your pain well in this poem. I could feel your heartache.

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    Are you sure everythings alright hun? I'm always here, hope you know that. Really good poem though. I never figured out how you write pieces like these... Share your secret? haha. Love you hun.

    Love Always
    ~Casey J.

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Great Job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Great Job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love the flow and i can feel the emotion in this poem