Awww...it's so pretty, sweet, and you pulled my heart into this one. Nice job on that! It was very good! I really liked the conclusion but the fear you expressed that maybe they wouldn't return the feelings. Nice job!
Charisma*

Aww Nice!

Yea that was anahi dont lie! I know she wrote that...why would valeria be in anahi's account anyway but its ok

Very sweet and sad at the same time. A heartfelt write. Nice job!

Awww..I liked this poem! I thought it had a lot of emotion and I really like the last two lines. Great job!
5/5

Aww, this was very cute, and sad at the same time. I'm sure everyone knows the feeling of unrequited love, and it's shitty, but your words described the hopes and fears that go along with loving someone very well. great work.

--Steph

Its so nice...! I loved the last line.
Brillent poem! Well done!

This poem is amazing!!! i love the words, and omg, the emotion!! lol, it's really sweet! great job with this one!!!
5/5!

Forever*Yours

Thank you for commenting my poem...yours are really good too...keep up the good work!