Comments : Almost Asked you To Lie

  • 17 years ago

    by laura

    Hey I really like this poem it's great!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr O

    I love it. How many time have we wanted to say something like that to someone yet we use our better judgement.
    Great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "To hear lies spattered forth to console me
    when those feelings aren't from you"

    Really greatly written, 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by suppressed

    I cant relate to this awsome poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Thompson

    WOW you know this poem is exactly how i feel about my X and I am so glad that he didnt lie. I hope you keep on wrighting cuz you have an Amazing gift!!! Keep It UP!!!

    ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I almost want you to say you love me
    That I am your only one"

    The only thing i can suggest is adding an "and" at the beginning of the second line to clean up the flow a bit, but it stands fine without it too.
    Your words, as always, as amazing and you seem to have put a lot of heart into this piece.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I loved it but I can no longer relate....Jake broke my heart. I guess all boys are the same... Good job though!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Hey gr8 poem, I wrote a similar piece a few months back called lie to me.. kinda da same theme but I wos tryin 2 work out if lies are ever justified to make yourself feel better, I too think that the truth is always better. Neway Luvd this piece as I could rel8!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    THIS POEM.. Is just so UH-MAZE-ING! It just really catches me. I've read it so many times.. It's just perfect. I love the title.. and the whole thing.. I can relate to it , as well. Amazing job. Keep it up, Babe.

    Bri.x