Let me be the first to tell you that you are absolutely brilliant! I love this poem! very good flow, very nicely written B..E..A- utiful :D
5/5

- Natasha

This was awesome! the flow and rhymes were great and I really like how you ended the poem. Nice imagery too!
5/5

Awesome,awesome,awesome

This was excellent!
You did a wonderful job on this, I enjoyed it muchly.

OMG is all I have to say. It's gloomy and beautifull at the same time. You have a talent. thanks for the comment. Keep it up

Really good, it's not just a poem but a great idea, nicely written.

Hannah, nikkuh, this is hella awesome.

btw i'm doing a powerpoint presentation of your city.
but i need to know 2 restaurants, 2 hotels, 1 college/university, 1 shopping area, 2 historical sites, 2 stadiums/arenas/concert halls, 1 amusement park/zoo/museum, 1 apartment or house, ........ :]] help?

"Twisted and deformed,
Blind and seeing all,
Watching the sun rise,
As night begins to fall."
This stanza got me speechless... It's just...amazing.
I really loved this one,too:
"Welcome to my dreamland,
The world inside my mind,
Careful what you look for,
And fear what you might find... "
Excellent piece, 5/5.

Wow, this is so good. I like the flow and wording is outstanding.
Lovely rainbows whisper,
As ash falls from your eyes,
As the sky turns ember,
Another angel dies.
^ My favorite stanza, it is incredibly written.
This is amazing dark poem, it deserves 5/5

Loved it very nice

Wowerzzz!! u r sooooo good!!!

I really liked this poem, I decided to add it to a favorite, but, 5/5 definitely.

A very good rhythem, and I enjoy the descriptive phrases.