:) excellenta lol i think you shld be who you want lol i know i am
this would be a awesome song i recon keep it up
5/5

It's so hard not to conform to what society wants us to become, you should always be your own man, I know I am. Amazing poem and so true 5/5

This is such a truthful poem, unique too. I know what you mean about how guy's are supposed to act a certain way, the way society says they do. But most girls like a softer guy on the emotional side. Be yourself, who you really are. Being true to yourself is the best thing you could do. I want to say thanks for your comment on my poem also, I really really appreciate it. =] 5/5 for this, it's great. You're going on my favorites. =]

Tammie

Act *Davidly*!
a "scarred broken little you" is better than a "fake healthy big not you". right? ;)
and anyway, when you show the others "your true self", the "little you" changes to the *BIG you*
take care,
Marjan

I truly loved this poem. I have to admit though, the last lines were my absolute favorite. You really won me over on this one. Excellent job, 5/5

Hey david look all of the votes of 1 are gone yay
*throws party*
howd u do it?
well you dont need me 2 tell u again this poem was fantastical
lol

A man is supposed to be anything that he wants to be. This poem is very good. I don't know exactly what other guys think other guys should act like, but from your poem I got a good idea. 5/5!

This is so true. so many people are wondering if they should be themselves or try to be someone else. YOU SHOULD BE YOURSELF. EVERYONE SHOULD BE THEMSELVES.

Great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Never change yourself for anyone cuz i love you just the way you are lol

This poem holds a lot of truth. It's amazingly penned. I loved the end the best though. Wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

Wow... what a strong message... it's amazing... I love this poem because it speaks volumes of truth!! There is meaning pratically shoved into every word... 5/5 as always, although this one deserved more!!
Much Love As Always,
.:Danielle:.

Conform into the perfect little zombies with no mind of their own free to roam a society that is as dead as they are. Amazing. I loved the message behind this. You are quite an intellegent writer, with a passion, that is rarely seen anymore. the last of a dying breed so to speak. Again I have to give you a round of applase for such an excellent poem. 5/5

This is the one I'm gonna use, sweetheart. I will show it to you when it's doen, k?

ttyl,

Ingrid

Amazing poem... and I also believe u should always be real. Keep it up.
XOXO Trish