Simple and sad but it pours with emotion. Love can be so heartbreaking. Nice to see you put your heart into this write.

Sometimes the things we want to work just don't work out as planned but thats life, great job on the poem short and sweet 5/5

Very good poem! I can certainly relate to some parts. I thought you did a great job writing this. =)
5/5

I like this poem.. its cute.. sad but good

Well done, a good poem.
just try to let the words flow from inside, this seems a little rocky on flow.
but it is good.
xxxx

Ahh, I know the feeling, my boyfriend cheated on me too. I found this poem had a beginning, a middle, but no end, you jsut kind of dropped off and didnt finish the story. I found your rhymes were very traditionnal, therefor making them kind of boring. I did like the idea of the poem, and the emotion you put into it, but if you work on those few things, you could make it even better.

--steph

I've been cheated on many a times. Lol. And everytime I bring it up, I laugh. Because.. It's their bad. They lost me. (I know, I am cocky). Good luck and good job! 4.5/5

Very simple and short. But you captured the sadness very well. 5/5 good job!

I really liked this poem, its the worse feeling when someone you really love cheats on you.
Great write 5/5

I loved this.
There was so much emotion packed into this, and I could sense the pain behind the words.
I enjoyed the imagery used and I thought it flowed really well.

This is a nice poem which is written greatly.

The rhyme scheme was a little weird and it needs some work. All the lines should rhyme, the 6th stanza doesnt rhyme but all the other ones do, but thats the only suggestion i have. Also, i didn't feel the emotion in the poem. Make me FEEL something! Although the idea of the poem is good, it needs some work. keep it up though!

-kayla

I've got a poem with the same title! But about this one..i really like it. I've had that happen before too and it sux, ne? 5/5