Very strong emotional poem, good job! I liked this one a lot and its very sad what sone fathers do.

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Awesome job. great emotion. It's so sad. Keep up the awesome work!!

This was supposed to be sad! and it did make me cry, not just sad tears, also happy tears. it's good to know that somewhere out there, there are some people who do care about their mothers and fathers.
sad poem from a beautiful heart!
keep shining!
take care,
Marjan

Wonderfully written with alot of emotion. Your dad will be very proud of you. Great job, 5/5. Em

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