by TINSLEY Jan 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Joyful tears |
by Oliver Bird
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Greate Poem... I rely feel the love.. |
by Chrissi
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Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=275250 |
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Very nicely written. I loved it. However in the first Stanza, you used the letter, "U" in place of the word, "you" switch it..lol The flow was good, as well as the structure. Great Job. |