Wow this is a really unique poem and I enjoyed it very much so. The last 2 lines are very impressive they kinda make the poem in my eyes. Excellent job 5/5

Wow.. this is such a creative poem.. i really like it.. its perfect.. im not even joking.. it has great rhyme and flow.. and is very clever.. i dont want to make this a short one liner.. but i really dont have anything to say.. its just an amazing poem.. like wow.. the end was just so perfect.. I LOVE when the title of the poem is in the end.. i think its a nice touch lol :)

Wow this was awesome you found exactly the right words!! 5/5 really really good...

Wow. I just...couldn't believe this poem. It was brilliant in so many ways! Just...wow! Lol.

The descriptions were perfect for this kind of poem. They really brought out the depth in it and everything. My favourite lines:

[And the trees stretch their barren fingers wide,
yawning in gentle gratitude at the morning's last light.
Saluting, paying their dues in one harmonious gesture,
I sigh a hello with them, to another handsome night]
^^ Thos lines were perfect. They had personification, which I really like in a poem. No idea why, I just do. Those lines gave my a real image in my head about what you were talking about.

The flow was excellent. I didn't see any places where it needed to be fixed. And the rhymes you used were far from cliche. They seemed that they took some thought into making them up. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Oh wow...
I absolutely loved this.
I thought your use of vocabulary and imagery was astounding.
The flow was perfect and I loved the rhyme scheme.
Excellent work.

WOW...fantastic imagery. Full of vivid imagery that creates a world of hope.
The flow was very steady and undisrturbed. Original and creative write. 5/5

Your descriptive language kept me on the edge of my seat. i felt like i was there! just beautiful 5/5

Wow... This poem is sooo good! It has an excellent vocabulary chioce, an excellent flow, great imagery.. Its amazing! It was really unique and out of all the poems ive read, this definately is unique. It also had great description. One thing that i think you hsould change is the punctuation, i mean one line ended with a commar, the next with a full satop. Thought you should ofused enjambment. But still an excellent read, keep it up, and i defo look forward to reading more! xx

Perfect.
Your vocabulary was amazing, it wasn't too difficult to understand yet you didn't use the cliche words.
The imagery was so vivid! =] Picturing everything in my mind.
Overall, hun this was a perfect write. To me, it was completely flawless.
5.5

This is quite cleverly put together. The imagery is wonderful. I love your word choice. A nice change from the simple wrded poems I've been reading. Great job! 5/5

Wow, this poem was amazing. It flowed so well. And it wasn't cliche at all. I loved the imagery.. it was so beautiful, and clear. I found no flaws what-so-ever, Absolutley perfect. Your vocabulary is uh-maze-ing!!!

Excellent job. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

This is so good! i love it. original topic too. but i love how it rhymes perfectly. good job!