I liked the way you wrote this poem, it was really well penned, well done.

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I love the way you began and ended the poem, it made it seem complete. it wasnt an ending that seemed to drift off into space. the imagery that you used was absolutly fantastic. sitting here and thinking of staying in the tub till i was chill makes me shiver. great job, i love it. keep writing!