Very beautiful you definitaly have the poets gift. you are just amazing. keep up the good work and put that talent to good use, chica!

This is the best poem i have ever read~!

A powerful poem. Short and to the point... I like it!
How wonderful a writer you are.

Nice poem! Short, but full of meaning. I liked the rhymes and flow.
Good write! 5/5

Very well written .. i like this alot u express alot emotion = ]

Though all your poems are good :] i like this one specifically coz i like the message in it.. or what i thought the message is.

"And we live without reason
In a World full of treason.
The evil are our good,
The tyrants understood."

love that stanza. keep it up & thx.

This is my favorite so far i don't
think you can top one

Well a lil bit short, but very well written :) lots of emotions are expressed here.... keep on working.... ur great

Nice :)

Wow i like the way you have turned everything around, and it rhymes too!. thanx for your comment, and yeh i spose you could take it that way. laura xxx

WOW, I really liked this poem. It's very powerful and I give it 5/5. Thanks for your comment. Keep up the great work.

Kristina C.

This is one dark poem, i can sens the presenc of the shadows in here, awesome one...

Thank you so much for the comment! im glad to get some feedback! ive read some of your poems and they were great! keep up the good work! and thanx!

HEy i luv this poem its really good. I luv your poems cause i can relate to them all (keep up the good work lol)
~Linzii

Your poem is very amazing.
very good!

This was awesome and so dark. I really liked this poem!

Astryd

I really like this its really good..well done

I love it. The way you contrast everything is very clever indeed. I'm all for agreeing the world is full of treason and backstabbing as well. :) i'll read your other poems soon but at the moment I should get back to my uni work x

Wow! It was so dark and just plain beautiful. The phrasiology was great and the way you paint a picture is very vivid. And the title really draws you in...great job!!! 5/5 for sure! Keep it up :)!
~Midnight Sun

This is such a good poem i love the last line =)