I love this poem...and I also love the fact that I am first to comment!!!! lol Once again great poem...ttyl buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

LOOL! yeah hun .. u are the first this time! =p

thaanx alot for the comment! appreciate it !

tc..!

Damm not the 1st to comment
burning wings you have made a very powerful enemy my friend jk

btw great poem B
and don't worry u have me

5/5 as all ways

AWWW!!! thaanx locksy !!! =$

Amazing poem!!! another full success!! but to tell you the truth i thought that you will get over him:(... never thought that you might never! but maybe its just cause you never really loved before not even your first could have considered to be your first love... i wish all this hadnt happened that you were still happy like before.. but no one can change the past so you'll have to accept the present and look forward to the future with open arms.. thats all the advice i have to give you cause you're on a journey that has just begun.. but you'll never be alone cause im always be a step right behind you following you helping you guide you to where you were meant to be in heaven! love ya hun never quit hoping for a better life and future cause i wont let you!!

THAAANX SUNSHINE !! :D

well.. i am actually starting to feel better !!! i feel so loved with my new 25 yrs old guy ! hehehe ..!

Looooooooool!!!! too big for you yet ideal age in your mind =p and SEXY age in your heart!!! never thought of it like that but i hope he's serious and all over you and the perfect cure for you!!!

Lol! well.. lets just hope that ! =p

This is really good

Dave.x

Thaaanx ! =D

HOTT DAMN! I had a good day today! wow! lol...anyway. I don't know what to say....hmmm........um..........idk. I'll talk to ya later okay hun...buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Lool.. i had a VERY bad week!! eeeh..

umm.. well.. i dont know what to say either!! so...

thaanx for the comment hun! =D

Hey Hun! I'm sorry you had a bad week. The rest of mine sucked hard core! god. life sucks ass. Well, I'll talk to you later buh-bye!

Yeah .. oh well.. life goes on! i just got back from eygpt!!! damn its dirty over there! but i had fun..

Not quite perfect so had to go with 4/5, some passages are not as good as the rest of the poem. especially this part which only ends in "you":
"For Im still madly in love with you
I still want no one but you
I still day dream about being with you
I still constantly fantasize about you
Id still die for another touch from you
Another hug from you
Another kiss from you"

but i definitely like ur style n i liked the feelings u were talking about in this one.

Thaaanx for the comments hun .. and i like it that ure honest ! ;)

"For you werent just a great boyfriend to me
You were actually the greatest part of me" okei! that really shocked me!

i'm like..off!

And this:

For you were with no doubt the perfect guy
You were my lover, my soul mate, my guardian angel

One of the nicest things i ever heard!

To my surprise! thought that lost love for women was just that..something lost
with a no coming back attitude for a perfect guy [as you describe]

congrats! i could give you a six but there's only fives

Wow this was exactly how i felt without my x very impressive work u got 5/5 with me!!!!