Comments : Words can kill

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, such truth in your words. The title caught my eye, because it's so true. I absolutely love how you said:
    "Can't you see
    Love is just potential hate?"
    Because it's so true. Excellent write, it flowed well, the rhyming fitted in, emotion expressed, great word choice and the ending was strong. Everything i love in a poem. Thanks for your comment on mine, i really appreciate it. =] 5/5 For this.

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "And you've killed me
    Without even touching me
    Your words have done it."

    Thats so true, words can hurt deeper than any physical pain can
    The first stanza was very meaningful to me to.
    Very emotive indeed, something every good poem needs.
    5/5 for sure
    *Gem*

  • First, thank you for the comment you left on my poem.
    I'm glad I chose to read this one because at this moment in time, I can completely relate and i love how it's not been done in the same style poems are normally done if you get me and i like the idea of what you're writing about, so you get a 5! well done and keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by b r i d g e t

    Wow this poem is very strong n deep i know exactly what u mean by love just turns to hate u have talent girl thank u so much for ure coments on my poem it means the world to mean
    keep up the good writing x

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychel

    Wow. this is wonderful. the second stanza was the best. love it. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    What a poem. Its definetly a thin line between love and hate. no doubt.
    the right words at the wrong time
    well you know the rest.

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Beautiful poem with a great meaning. my fav. line:

    Your love will turn
    Like a possessed demon.

    shows emotion. thx for the comments on my poems. it really means a lot to me. keep writing!