Comments : Just One Wish

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Sad, but beautiful! Be strong! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Wow, really good poem it has two sides hope of the wish to be granted and sadness, really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah

    Omg, i love it, that reminds ne so much of when a friend died

  • 16 years ago

    by stephanie

    Hey i havent heard from you in a while whats up well umm check out some of my poems that ive added and comment/vote on them kk well ttysl
    steph

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awww beautiful sadness.. It touch me... u r so damn good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riffy

    Wow, I could really feel the emotion in this. Its so sweet yet sad, well done
    x.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww, that really touched me, i wanted to cry after i read it, to make a reader feel that deeply about a poem you must be a true poet! great job 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    LOOK A UNICORN!!!!

    Haha. Well it left me speechless, so since that line never fails, I figured I'd take your advice and use it :) Amazing write by the way. 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.