You've nailed the feelings on most of my love poems, great job. Your style is fresh and enjoyable. This was a great read. Keep up the good work.

I loved it! It's filled with different kinds of emotions (love, hate..) I just hope she realizes that he's a jerk. Anywayss.. keep up the wonderful work..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

It's really moving and impressing,good job 5/5

Great Poem!!! Like Whoa!! 5/5