Wow this was very powerful. I can definately relate to something like this, and it hurts a lot. It's good that you could get your feelings out, and I hope you were strong enough to get out of that relationship, no one deserves to be treated like that.

I liked this poem, it was very emotional and captivating. I did notice though, that your thoughts were kind of all over the place, like this line :

"but I see now, that I wasted that on you."

It is kind of confusing and hard to read, you may want to put in an antecedent for "that". Other than that, I loved this, great work.

--Steph

Wow you really took your feelings down to this poem and they reached to my heart,5/5