It's ok...erm, dun rly noe how 2 comment on this type of poem lol, but it's gud anyway...

Wow this is an amazing poem. I can relate. Plz read and comment some of my poems if u get the chance. Stay strong!

Hey i love this poem, it was so sad. i love the way you never forced any of the rhymes and every word of every stanza had a perfect meaning. you got across you message, but hope it aint real. mez x