Comments : The hole is gaping bigger

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    This is soo sad and full of emotions
    :(, I really liked it, Bcoz i can feel like that sometimes. Plz read mine, Im sure u could relate to them, good job ;).

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Thank you for your kind comments, i thought i´d return the favour and i´m glad i did. this is such a beautifully sad poem i really enjoyed it. you really captured how it feels to be on the edge of how you feel your life should be. great poem xx