Wow that was a great poem i loved reading it 5/5 and thank you for the commment

I really loved the first stanza of this poem. so well expressed.good work

Very sad and yet deep. It's filled with emotion and I love the first stanza:
"Rain feels like ice against my skin,
keeping me attached to reality.
Reminding me that the pain is still there,
waiting to take control of me."
Great job! =)

Incredible. Simply incredible. awesome emotion I truely felt like crying... I can relate, perhaps that's why, but it doesn't change the fact that this is a hard hitting emotion-packed poem that every girl can relate to. Fantastic job. 5/5

Thanks for commenting on my poem.
xxx Olivia

This is a very good poem, love the flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!