Comments : Will It Really Last?

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, I DO like it. It was very heart felt and beautiful, great work.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Proof of a great vocabulary. Great rythm, awesome meaning, and i love the short choppy lines. Great poem.
    5/5
    ♥
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Again, this poem is great!!! ur an amazing writer, you know just how to use your words!

    Forever*Yours