Comments : Perfect Chaos

  • 13 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ Haha, a wierd random poem...but I like that stuff :D +.+

  • Holy ****!!!! That came from my happy danielle??? My hyper alway goofing around Danielle??????? I love you! *huggles*

  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Dark .
    Yeah`, I didn`t really understand it .
    But I read it over & over .
    Fantastic job (:


  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The poem to me makes sense because one day soon this whole world is going to come to an end, and we'll all be reaching with no hope, great job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very rare non-rhyming poem. This one is my favorite so far out of your poems. It was a bit long though.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sara

    That was amazingly written, the flow was great, and you are so talented... i love reading your work. keep writing and ill keep reading! 5/5 from me and thank you for the comment!

  • 13 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Wow I would hate to know what or who you were thinking about when you wrote that xDD

  • 12 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow that was dark and deep!! plenty of beautiful imagery and i really enjoyed the description, keep it up, great work!
    nuff luv xx