Cute poem.. but im not crazy about the last stanza..it's a little out of place.. but other than that everything you wrote was simple but strong.. nice job!

Man, your good at writting love poems. You need to teach me. I love you too, by the way.

Pretty good job. Very sweet, though a little too repetitive in the word choice for my taste. Keep it up!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww this is soooooooo sweet...i loved it!!! you really put emotion into it...great job!

Awwww very sweet poem another 5/5

Great poem, I really liked it alot. One of the better love poems I have read in quite a while:D

Ii l0v3 thiz p03m...ii f33l diiz waii ab0ut mii b3b3

One word.
WONDERFUL.

I got the message from this poem, and it was well written too. Good job, dear. :]

Again not too original but the poem has no flaw so 4.5

- Em

I think this is a very good poem sandra, love the structure of the rhyme scheme, perfect write, a definate 5/5!!! keep writing you are talented!!!

All i can say is I live for THAT love!!!

All i can say is I live for THAT love!!!

This is sooo cute, and full of loVe!
i really loved it, i will read more!
luv gabriella

Another wonderfully written peice of poetry. I loved it. I liked how you repeated "I live for this love" Outstanding job.

Peace, Joe

%100 love and so touching,well done honey it's so beatifully written 5/5