Wow sez.. thats brilliant... really amazing... lovies you
mwah

WOW! I really liked this poem. It was short and sweet. It had a lot of power and anger wrapped up in these words. My only suggestion is to take out the word "all" in the last line of your 1st stanza because you used it in the line above, so it was a bit repetitive. But I did really enjoy it! Thanks for your nice comment, too!
Charisma*

Nive i love it!

Wow not realizing that there was so many peolple in this world that have the same feelings as i do i really love this poem and im going to share it with my friends..=)