For me this was VERY hard to read :( No girl should EVER be treated like that, its a very sad poem and the people that do this deserve the worst!!
but as for the poem amazing 99/5 as always :))

Such a sad story but brilliantly wrote.
You wrote it extremely well and the flow and rhyming were spot on. I really felt for the girl and felt my eyes filling up as i was reading it! Its just sad to know that things like this happen all the time.
5/5

Wow that is amazing it brough tears to my eyes. it was one of the hardest poems to read and i hate to know that people go through that sorta stuff. you amaze me with your writing and your talenting skills. but with the strenght in your writing i think you will go far. your amazing Gem like simply amazing. keep up the work
9999/5 ( its worth even more then that )

-chelseaa;

ps. thank you for the sweet comment. my poems dont compare to yours but i am glad you like them:)

Gem,
This was so sad and very hard to read. This happens so much more than we know. There are alot of people that this happens to that never tell their story. I hope this will help someone open up and tell. Excellent job! Cindy

Holy Crappers. That was like amazing! 5/5

It's so sad yet beautifully written, i love it! Keep up the good work- Steph

Thsi was a sad poem, but a good one.

Wow. i know how hard it is to write something like this. it is a good poem but thats not the issue. the fact of the matter is ur not who u r because of it. i have a half finished poem sitting on my computer sketching whether or not to put it on this site. alot of my friends could see it n im not quite sure im redy to share. certainly adding you to my favourites. much love .xx

Hard to write, I believe that, having someone talk about rape stories is hard, even making a poem about it...so I give you a 5/5 of this poem because this poem deserves it..

Bernadette.C.

Wow
This blew my mind away!
I loved it but it was really sad
Because that kinda stuff
Actually happens
But great work you did excellent
5/5 Kaila!

Wow
This blew my mind away!
I loved it but it was really sad
Because that kinda stuff
Actually happens
But great work you did excellent
5/5 Kaila!

Wow
This blew my mind away!
I loved it but it was really sad
Because that kinda stuff
Actually happens
But great work you did excellent
5/5 Kaila!

Wow. Excellent piece! 5/5

This is amazing.I love you..and i wish i could write like this!great job..XOXO

Short story poem still saids something thanks for commting on mine!

Wow. Very sad. I loved it though.

Thanks for the comment! And this is also a nice poem!

That was such a deep, shocking poem (in a good way lol)
You really put a lot of thought into it, and it really was incredibly written
5/5 take care xo

Oh wow. i know so many people who have been raped, and it's the saddest thing in the world...

good write.
5/5
Allanah

I really liked this poem the message was great and the emotion was done very well you should take a bow on this one very well done I must confess. Kudos Plot121