Wow never seen one like this :) i love it :) something new :P love it!! :))

I think i can speak for a lot of people when i say that this is something new and indifferent. but i really like it, and maybe i will try it sometime ;) anywayz, keep up the good writing hun! 5/5 as always!

A very good effort, well done and keep up the good work. There are so many interesting traditional forms that can be tried, this is one of them. Continue to try different forms at it will sharpen you skills.

Best regards,

Steve

Gem,
Another beautiful piece from you. I stand in awe of those that can do this kind of poetry. I just can not do this. Excellent work! Your Friend Cindy

I love it!! great job!!

Strong, interesting.

lisa

Very creative. I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

A very creative piece, filled with bursting imagery, nice job Gem! This was a stunning read for me and you mastered this form, keep it up!

Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne

This was a great poem it was the best short poem i have read in my life lol, plus it was way better than mine..