Wow that amazing... a very beautiful poem keep it up.. =)

Oh gurl i luv it! keep writing!

Wow this is so good! I loved the imgary you put into it. 5/5

Your poetry has developed so much! well done, this is an excellent poem with great detail and imagery, it is also a captivating story, great job!!

Hey! awsome peom! well done! I reallly love the story told in this poem!!! Great rhyming! exellent poem! keep up your awsome poem! love mel

Great poem i love it becacuse i like how u portray your character through a painting. but i dont like the stanza:
Her love was stolen
that we knew
but in reality
what could we really do?
:::::I think that the words can be changed around a bit, or even new words. only because i dont really understand it.:::other than that, you did a great job. keep it up
_The Writer