Sweet mann this is pretty awesome nice spirit in it good job can u comment and read some of my stuff next time ur on plz and should write more sand put them on u r pretty good no not pretty u r awesome good job

keenan

I love this poem its very visual i can see everything u r say...goodjob

ashleigh

Love it<3
it's AMAZING
love the use of words
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I really like this one I think it was well written by someone who speaks well.. great job..