Once again great poem man.. very powerful keep it up

Great work! It even rhymed! ^^ 5/5

Well done colb! *claps* lolollol

OMG that poem gave me goosebumps. I think that is the best poem you've written. It was simply amazing!
Keep it up
Caity

Omg that has to be my favourite poem of yours!! it is so good, it's so powerful and full of meaning. the ending was so good it made me want 2 cry!! honestly i can tell that was a poem from the heart you know.. That is a poem you should always keep and be proud of k! i wish i could have voted higher! it was more than excellent i can't think of a higher word than excellent but thats what it was!! ok well i thik u get the picture lol.. i could rave about this poem forever but i have to stop b4 i get too carried away.. haha i think i already have.. ok im going to stop now!! :D:D bridge !! xx

This was a very good poem keep up the good work and i give it a 5/5

I liked it, keep carrying the torch

Omg! that is so good. i dont even know what else to say besides wow lol. its really awesome

Great poem like the last part best well done

Definetly one of the best poems i've read on this site.
keep up the amazing work.

That was good keep it up ok see you latter =)