Awww. I don;t know why, but i wanted to cry when i read this. You have such a talent for channeling your emotions into your work and letting everyone else feel them too.
Well done hun
5/5
*Gem*

Hey cindy, well done on this poem it is fantastic! i loved how it just flowed so evenly, there were no bumps in the road if u know what i mean. It was so full of meaning, i love how you can put ur feelings and emotions into words like that. well done :) xx

Another very good poem cindy, loved the flow, flawless, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Another excellent write. your talent has increased greatly. 5/5

Well done Cindy....another pretty piece full of beautiful sentiments.

The sweetness and longing rings loud and clear here, Cindy. Well done

How do you make sad so beautiful? Excellent job on this one! Good flow. I love the structure, short but powerful. Great job!

Hey Cindy,
I was very pleased to click on my favourites and find you had written some more poems.
I don't need to tell you, that all your poems are awesome but they are.
This was a lovely but sad write, the emotions were expressed beautifully,
good job,
Your dear Friend, Tara-Kay

Awww... this is soo sad.. great writen thoough.. perfect flow and perfect rhyme.. the feelings are rreally strong in this poem

You have alot of talent i love this poem it is so awesome! i love it.

I really like this poem... i got into it...

My too wanna write love poems

Good poem 5/5 from me

This is boring.. JOKE this is good

Very emotional... You really poor your heart and soul into your poems... great job, and very solid poem, keep it up and dont let anything get in your way of writing... this is something that you are very talented at... Keep it up

I like it it is asome!!

''Desires within me
Emotions run strong
Held in your arms
Where I belong''

Awwwh, that was so0o cute! It really made me smile when I read that stanza.
beautifully written.

You don't belong in his arms just yet.... you belong here.... people need you here. I want you and need you here :) xxx