This was really sad, it flows very well n is very well written, the language choice is also really good, well done

This is a poem with deep meaning which is written greatly, great job..

That was such a sad poem. you made me cry! :(

it had such depth and I can deffinatly relate to how you feel 5/5

A very sad and dramatic poem. It lacked originality which I think is one of the keys to a great poem.

i still enjoyed it
4.5

Wow, this is kinda like being hypnotised. It was so intruging, i found the title and htought wow lol

xxx alex xxx

Wow, this is excellent. This is type of the poetry that I prefer. The poem is very powerful. It seems to me like a chapter two of your poet An unwilling blade. Good vocab.

And I forget the ending is brilliant.5/5

OMG! I nearly cried! I love it!