But she was just to scared.

To scared of what people would think,
To scared of what they would say,

All the to`s there should be too`s .
Anyways, I love the last two lines . They really got to me . It wasn`t one fo the best i`ve read from you, but still well penned .
..__MiNDYY

Can you read my mind or something?
This is exactly how I fell.
I enjoyed this, I thought it flowed really well, and I liked the imagery.

For some reason it keeps stealing my text on your poem Bleed Til I Die.
**I'm sorry you feel this way

I can relate to this poem, and that's what I really like about it. It's so broken and lovely. Good job - I think I want to read some more by you.

*FAVS YOU*

I love this one too i can relate to this also ... i like the other one better but this one is still 5/5

I UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL I FEEL THE SAME WAY HAVING TO ACT LIKE LIKE EVERYTHING WAS OK CAUSE THERE WAS NO ONE TO TALK 2 OR EXPRESS YOURSELF

Wow, that was a great poem. It really caught my attention, and I read it over again. It describes how I feel sometimes. Keep up the great work!

Your poem shows something everyone goes through.It shows how people hide the real them because they are scared.Good job you captured the essence.

Oh my gawd...that is exactly what i am....

I love this poem so much! I can defiantly relate to it. Its so sad but has an aura of truth to it. You're a great writer!

~Liana~

Touching

Wow! i can relate myself to this poem.. my weakness is to let people know who i really am and they might reject me.. so i've tried to pretend everyday that i am happy but the truth is.. i wasn't..

Wow!

amazing poem!!! 5/5

really conveys how i feel at the moment...
and i can really feel the emotions!!!

....kaila

Oh my.... it's like you know exactly what i'm going through....... i love your poems their great keep writing

Amazing poem you have written here! i like it a lot