Poem is great as all yours i just never
understand how some one can hurt
themselves and feel plesure from
it . its what i wrote about in my
darkside. good is bad pain is pleasure its dark but i still don't get it
im sorry i can't read all ur poems
some are to hard for my dumb ass words too big. I was'nt always this
stipid drugs burns cells and once
gone thier gone

Sanity and serenity, two words i never read. great poem. i loved how you set it out, different yet effective.

5/5 David