This is a really good poem!! i love the way it's written, ur an amazing writer!
"Dangling, you feel lost in time
Half and half, no whole"
That's my fave part, i don't know why, but i love it!! great job!
5/5

*Shawte*

That is very deep... the sign of a truly great poem is it needs to be read more than once
...this one has layers of meaning

This is such a good poem...you have such a consistant talent even with so many poems. Great job!
Umm, quick question....are you planning on judging the contest any time soon? I think a lot of ppl are wondering. Thanks :)!!!
~Midnight Sun

Very good poem, the imagery was excellent, I only wished it was longer. Great job though! 5/5

Hmm, not one of your best poems. I didn't see the creativeness like you other poetry has. It was ok though, I still enjoyed it.

You have very vivid poems. So much different from mosdt unoriginal poems I seem to read more and more often.

5.5

never stop.

Well written! a job well done! 5/5