I liked it! Good job!

Has a good Morale
but some rhyme was forced
and it seemed like you used to many
Elementry Rhymes
but the morle and power of the story was still good
which still gives this a 5
~TPC~

That's horrible i mean the poem is good i'm talking about the situations. lol.. great job 5/5
-vino

Man, another great poem. it's just great, it makes a great story too.

Wow!....great work...you are great at rhyming (something i still am trying to master lol)..

Roy played life with a glorious role.
Now he must rest with his peaceful soul.

--wonderful ending

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