Comments : Broken Soul

  • 15 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    Very well written. Keep it up!! I hope you feel better soon, well 5/5 from me kk B-Bye. Your friend DeadGirl

  • 15 years ago

    by ephemera

    I was very depressed when my true love moved away and I contemplated this same thing...

    " i know god won't want me to end my life"

    It is true for me, and this line really hits home because its what keeps me alive and in love.

    " i know god won't want me to end my life"

    Perhaps to get a better understanding of why this poem is so special to me you should read "The Letter" or "My Choice [Part Two]". Thank you so much for writing this poem. You are one of my faves. 6/5

    Astryd