Wow! Debbie your talent never ceases to amaze me. Again I stand in awe.(Just an expression haha) You are filled with such a talent. Your writing takes my breath away. Love you Big Sis Cindy

Is this written in English? Just kidding. Very broad word choice. I guess some people will be busting out their dictionaries. Nice imagery. Beautiful job. Clever and unique. 5/5!

Amazing. I've never read anything like this. I'm speechless right now. You write with so much vivid detail. That to me, is real poetry. Excellent write!!

-` Liz

Someone pinch me...
did I just read that......
How do you do this......
I am running out of what to say!
I just press 5....most be something in the genes.....very beautiful write, again!!

I have read this so many times...
Works on many levels....????

Dave I think is close but in another sense miles off!! For me this is your best.....I just don't think it is going to get better than this one......
for me it has so many refs....
I think you had some help here...????
which has me wondering
Alignment? speechless....I am actually wondering if you know what you have written

Wow Debbie this was nicely penned. I loved it, You are truly a great poet, keep up the amazing works.

Peace, Joe

Debbie,
Just had to comment again on this and let Barry know you did this all by your lonesome. lol Excellent Debbie! BRAVO BRAVO

Dream in cumulus mirage - I love that line! I love the use of words - though some are quite a mouthful to say outloud. They don't all trip lightly on the tongue. Yet, the writing is beautiful.

I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

This is still the best poem you have written.....never get tired of this.

Awesome write deb. so many large words. I love words.

4.8 .....what is going on!!
Still my fav. poem...

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

Beautiful..

embellished with rich words and metaphores

Still a work of art...just love this poem

I could mumble here about vocabulary and imagery, but what I really have to say is.....How esoteric and simultaneously how accessible!..Bravo!....
You may have a new fan....

Hey winner....so I want to expand upon the comments I made on the boards...as I felt they were spot on regarding your piece.

[I felt this was a multi layered piece, which had a duel message running through it of the complexities of relationships communicated through the medium of the sky and weather types. Just beautiful]

What i meant when I said this of you winning poem is that it was obvious to me that you had some pretty powerful emotions or memories fueling this piece, but you didn't just let them spill onto the page blankly....it seemed to me to held onto them and worked them all through a beautiful metaphor, which was immensely visual in nature and actually added more understanding of what you were feeling by doing this.

Every line hold more insight, plus the knowledge of the simple feelings that inspired the metaphors.....put simply...this is a wonderful expression of emotions...

I take my proverbial hat off to you...as soon as i saw this poem I know it would be a winner....

regards, Kevin.