I got the feeling but didn't sense enough imagery. The emotion was good but limited.

Good poem. but i feel left hanging!! i want to know more!! =[[

Also the 'and' in the end does not fit as well as i think you intended it too. you should make the line longer in teh middle instead of using and in the beginning.

otherwise great write again. =]

xx3Lauren

Omg
i love it
idk wat the other 2 aretalkin about but i really liked it

u gotta nw wat the person is goin threw 2 imagine it

its real nice kinda sad
but its one of the best poems in this place

Wow, this is really good. You can definatly feel your emotions.

LOVE THIS POEM.. ofcourse.. thats why it won 1st place.. great job.. great rhyme and flow.. and i just love it

I LOVED this!!!
I think this is one of the best I have read of your's.
That second stanza was just...birlliant, my favourite part, it had so much impact.
Wonderful work!