I can't see why no one has voted or commented this poem. it is a fine work of literature! everything flowed nicely together and your word choice was grand. 5/5

Remember to take out all the ' in your poem. apart from that this poem was fab. amazing. wat other words can i say about it? it was mind blowing!

5/5 bravo clap clap wolf wistle.

David

This poem was very well written everything flowed 5/5

I especially loved the flow and that last line. . . often its that last line that does it for me in poem. . .

laura
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Oooh lala.
feels like this poem is about moi :)
and i think i mighta found my place.
anyways if this is about you....i hope you will to.
wish you bestssss of luck.
really a wonderful poem
***** 5stars

Oh, so sad poem. =[

It's really good though. Great job! 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Great job, only thing is that the weird things in the poem sorta ruin it. Its very well written... just I would take them out of the poem they will leave a better impression.