You write so beautifuly! sorry that i haven't read this one yet till now. it's soooooooo really well.... laking in words, but i always think you write really really well!

Um. wow. this poem was definately my favorite of yours thus far. [i still have a few more to read...]

the word choice was great the flow was superb and the content was wonderful! [gah, i sound like an english teacher...]
great job! 5/5

Love it. I've done similiar styles in which I repeat the first stanza. Nice job, I can't read your other poem because the friendship section of the site is expired.

I like how you repeated the first part. I loved this poem though! Great write!! 5/5

~Shae