Comments : Painting Flowers White; Virginity In Lighter Hue

  • 13 years ago

    by min

    I read this poem and the first thing i thought was just wow. . . . .its so beautiful,so truthful, just so raw. . . . .its awsum

    min
    xoxoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Oh wow this without any shadow of doubt an amazing write. The images that come forth from your superbly penned words and the feelings evoked are extraordinary.

    I must say, I particularly liked these lines. The images that they give rise to.

    "The passion of wolves in snow,
    and thy Mother's bleeding hearts;
    A wind waker in the dead Oaken grove,
    where I paint tulips, daisies, even wicked roses,"

    May you continue to write for many years, and your talent stay always strong. Best wishes and blessed be.

  • 13 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow... your poem left me speechless, and that's pretty hard to do.. I can't find a word to describe how hauntingly beautiful that was... I am absolutely amazed, stunned. The pictures you paint are amazing, and the flow is absoultely wonderful, and the choice of words is superb. I am running out of synonms for great!! Thank you for the comment on my poem, I am glad such an awesome poet liked my poem! 5/5, and if I could, it would be like 100/5 I just loved this poem!!! You have an awesome talent, and I hope it takes you far!!!!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 13 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wow, just wow, i've honestly never read anything like this. It's really something to see a talent like your expressed. I enjoyed every line.
    Sam.

  • 13 years ago

    by *VictronEica*

    That poem was amazing. You are now in my favorites!

  • Ok...so here it is. My friend showed me this poem and I about cried. It is so beautiful and I can't believe this came from someone my age. I am so used to people who don't give a shit about poetry at school and what not and it is a relief to read something this beautiful and deep. I loved it so much after my friend showed me it and I hope you don't mind me putting you on my favorites. I love your poems and I hope your writing will take you far because it is the most beautiful stuff I have ever read. And I read A LOT! I mean a lot a lot. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry.
    ~*Katie*~
    P.S. could you e-mail me sometime. I would like to get in touch with you and just talk.

  • Ok...so here it is. My friend showed me this poem and I about cried. It is so beautiful and I can't believe this came from someone my age. I am so used to people who don't give a shit about poetry at school and what not and it is a relief to read something this beautiful and deep. I loved it so much after my friend showed me it and I hope you don't mind me putting you on my favorites. I love your poems and I hope your writing will take you far because it is the most beautiful stuff I have ever read. And I read A LOT! I mean a lot a lot. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry.
    ~*Katie*~
    P.S. could you e-mail me sometime. I would like to get in touch with you and just talk.